Thank you so much. I really appreciate it.
April 29th, 2014 at 04:51pm
*Mibba Magazine Contest Judge*
I really like how your descriptions are strong straight from the first stanza. It grabs the reader's interest and invests them into this tale of passion. It's intense and that's something I truly admire in a poem.
Your word choice is fantastic and I love the repetition of certain words. It adds emphasis to the emotions portrayed in the piece.
It takes at least a couple reads to fully grasp the concept of the poem, but that's not a bad thing. The reader wants to understand more.
This piece reminds me of one of my favourite poems: My Last Duchess by Robert Browning. You've managed to convey desire and beauty effortlessly, and that can be pretty difficult.
Well done on writing a great poem!