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Something even I can't explain.
I read it and it sent chills down my back.
It might be a weird way of explaining it. But it reminds me of something I've seen.
Such beauty in the way you composed it. The way very word fits in every line.
How you do it I don't know.
When I see your writing I can't believe you chose to post it here. You should head to the big leagues.
Yet once again you have captivated my soul.
Congratulations!