Clouds - Comments

It's so simple, but it makes me smile. I'm reminded of when I was younger, and learning about Heaven, I literally thought that when I saw a huge mass of clouds, that it was Heaven.

The layout is really pretty too. I love how it's not taking up a huge amount of space.

I'm sorry that this isn't that great of a comment. It's really hard to comment on so little, and haiku's are the one type of poetry that I really don't like. You did a good job though!

HAH THIS IS FANTASTIC
because while it could be about clouds, this entire poem could also serve as a metaphor for people
we walk around aimlessly just barreling through life until we feel a sense of purpose (for clouds it'd be raining or something idk)