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  • RumpusRoom

    RumpusRoom (100)

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    I really like the ending. It all felt really well. And without reading the note, I read it as the person was holding a blade, not a syringe, but it made more sense knowing. I really enjoy this :)

    P.S. In my poem, Confrontation, the person I am staring at is me in the mirror.
    May 5th, 2014 at 02:46am