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  • lost em.

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    This is totally adorable and true Cute Best of luck to you! You wrote this amazingly!
    April 27th, 2016 at 12:45am
  • Michael Westen

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    I absolutely love this. I see that it's for a contest and I really hope you get 1st place. Good luck!
    April 22nd, 2016 at 02:16am
  • nearly witches.

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    I'm here as a judge for the Mibba Acrostic contest!

    This is going to sound so geeky, but I adore the way you've structured this poem. It seems more like a thought process than anything and honestly, I think it works so well in the context. It takes a slightly different stance from most of the other poems in the sense that it doesn't just come out and mention that Mibba is sacred or amazing, it's toned down and subtle and I love that about it. It seems like you put a lot of thought into the poem as a whole, but then again, it seems so simple and effortless in the way that it comes across.

    I honestly can't fault this poem. It pegs the website in a really interesting way and as I mentioned above, that sentence structuring is absolutely amazing. I think that's what really made this poem for me, as ridiculous as it sounds. Awesome job!
    May 6th, 2014 at 09:14pm