Space - Comments

::love: this is absolutely beautiful

Another beautiful creation by you. I expect nothing less from you than your soul and creativity.

I can imagone the narrator spilling her heart out to that one person and telling them what she really believes. The loneliness is clear in her words as well as the darkness that curtains her own eyes.

I'm not really sure why you named it space, seeing as its more about the loneliness and darkness surrounding the narrator than the space because of the moon and the starts.

It really made me wonder though, why were people lying about that? Did you want us to think that the narrator was up there, lost in a starry sky and the moon?

I really like it.

-Maria. :)