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@ kickingchaos
thank you for your comment
i'm glad you think it's well-written, because i don't really think i'm that good at poetry

Hello! I came a pound reading your relaxing poem, and wanted to say that it is very well written. The thing I love the most about your poem will have to be all the hidden, yet noticeable meaning you put into your words. The flow is very nice, which is why I kind of miss some of the deeper meaning. After re reading it though, it reminds me of how I feel about Mibba and it shows how others on this site also feel about Mibba. Basically your work has a lot of emotions in it that are well stated. Your background is very simple and calm. The features remind me of sleeping with sirens album art, "feel", and I indeed felt the genuine feelings expressed in your poem. Very well done :)