The Human Eye - Comments

Really good we'll done

Wow, this is really, really powerful. Just so you know (quick editing thing because I'm an editor for the Magazine and it's kind of my thing), you need to capitalize the 'H' in human and the 'E' in eye, so that it follows the Mibba poem guidelines. Now, anyway sorry, back to your incredible poetry. This is such a refreshing and original point of view; I love it! When I first saw the title, I'm not gonna lie, I was afraid it was going to turn out to be a stereotypical 'love is blind' or 'look inside yourself' poem, but it turned out to be so much more than either of those. It's very detailed and I appreciate the overall construction; how it builds on itself as time goes on. This is a very intricate and well-written piece of poetry!