The Night Sky - Comments

  • kim wonshik.

    kim wonshik. (2255)

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    This is a nice haiku! I think what was truly great about it was that you described the universe not as a black, cold abyss that I feel many people use, but instead termed it as "the deep, dark blue." I think that makes it sound so much more beautiful because when you think of the those two words put together, I, personally, think of the ocean - which is something beautiful and something that we still don't have much knowledge about.

    Nice job!
    October 6th, 2015 at 07:10pm
  • shelbyvengeance

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    I like it. It describes the night sky perfectly.
    October 6th, 2014 at 10:46pm