11:27 p.m. - Comments

  • I am glad you liked my comment :) @ silent hearts.
    July 19th, 2014 at 03:37am
  • @ XSoulXLoverX
    Thank you again! I'm always very unsure of posting things like this, because I have never experienced them. So to have real emotion - which I do, unfortunately, experience - come through, is a huge relief for me. Thanks for your feedback!
    July 19th, 2014 at 01:36am
  • Wow.

    This poem really captured something special. I liked the use of time. I thought that was a really interesting concept for a poem. I liked that the title of the poem was a very important time to the speaker in the poem. I also liked how it was a "random" time, in the sense that it wasn't noon, or 11:30p.m no it was 11:27, and to me that added something really nice. I thought that it made the poem unique and it made the poem stand out, which I liked. I liked the progression of the poem and I thought the ending was unexpected, but welcomed at the same time. I think that this poem has a real nice emotional power that I loved. It's very passionate and raw and I liked that very much about the poem.
    July 18th, 2014 at 11:52pm