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  • BellaBallistic

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    What an amazing peice of poetry!
    There's so much emotion there that you can feel it by just reading it. And that's usually what you want your readers to experience with poetry.
    Wonderful job!
    May 1st, 2008 at 09:47pm
  • MCRLUCY

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    In a word; AMAZING! Sharp and to the point, but packed full of emotion. I absolutely love that last line; takes your breath away.
    April 29th, 2008 at 11:06am
  • until my last breath

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    this is amaazing!

    i love it.
    April 28th, 2008 at 11:29pm
  • lindsaylunacy

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    I love how it all comes together line after line.
    The rymhing and poem in itself is wonderful.
    Great job on this. -thumbs up-.
    April 28th, 2008 at 10:44pm
  • mercipourlevenin

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    this is simply brilliant. a romeo and juliet feel .
    xoxo justine.
    April 28th, 2008 at 09:37pm
  • bbu.

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    you're great poem writer

    I love this poem, it's the best I've ever read
    April 28th, 2008 at 09:01pm
  • Remus J. Lupin

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    ....I love it ! =]

    Wow, beautiful and sad.

    amaaazing ^^
    April 28th, 2008 at 08:57pm
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