Walls - Comments

I love these kinds of poems. They may be short, but they are not easy to write. I, myself, cannot really write them. I think what you created was really nice. It's relevant, relatable and meaningful. I loved how the title is "Walls" because it really set the theme and central point of the poem, but it doesn't give too much away, which is always appreciated. I loved your diction, because it made the poem pack a lot of punch and that was really great. I love this poem, I really do. I think it was really well done. You managed to create something really powerful! I think you managed to create a special poem, and I loved it!

I love syllable poetry, I don't really post any of it but I find it fascinating. The simplicity of this piece invokes a strong emotion inside of myself. Just that feeling of not being able to get out of a situation is something I know well. thank you for posting :)