Great title and great subject matter, beauty to me does not lie on the outside of ones body, it’s what lies within, I love how you described how they looked, the poking and prying. When you declared yourself a work of art which is so true, we are all wonderfully made, we all feel exposed, naked or unpretty but what matters is how you feel about yourself. I love the flow of this poem, and subject matter at hand is one that could help girls. The imagery within poem was perfect, you awoke to discovery it was just a dream, but for many girls this subject matter is reality. Thanks for sharing.
July 13th, 2014 at 05:13pm