Beat of Our Hearts - Comments

@ elixir
Thankssss :) You are very nice ;) Have you noticed the influence of a song in the 15 verse??

@ Jezu
You're very welcome! Your English is just fine, I couldn't even tell the difference! Like I said, it was very well-written. :)

Oh, thank you!!!! The poem is about you said, I think it's clear xD I'm glad to find another person who has been in the same position, sure :) I think the poem's full of mistakes because I'm spanish and I'm not really good at english, but I try to express how I feel and if I write in spanish, nobody will understand it jajajaja Thanks for your support and your words, it means a lot to me ;)

I actually started to tear up a little bit while reading this. This was very powerful--heartfelt and selfless.
It's clear that you love this girl, enough to let her live her life with another person, even though it's very painful for you.
My heart goes out to you, random stranger. I've been in the same position, except of course it was vice-versa, a boy leaving me for another girl. I understand, as many other people will. It's very tough and I can see through the style of this poem how it affects you.
Time will heal your wounds. Or perhaps another. Either way, stay strong and keep pushing forward.

I really liked the physical structure of this poem. The two-line stanzas make it easier to read, since it's a bit longer and more narrative in terms of detail.

Great work!