"Memory" - Comments

how have you been? damn its been a year since i last been on

haha yeah hope he is good in the water. And happier? no. i think i come back to mibba only through really rough times to write it out :/

@ Donoso
Thanks. He's pretty prepared. Been planning since he was four, but He's naive. He's going to get a cranky wake up call. It's going to be good for him. You're doing Good though? you seem happier.

best of luck to your brother. military life is hard period. you give up a lot and its worse when people dont realize it

@ Donoso
Ah, I see. Congrats! My little brother is heading for Navy bootcamp in eight days. It's a rough line of work no matter the branch.

work lol i am almost out the marines and starting a new chapter in my life. never really had time to write

@ Donoso
Thanks. I haven't heard from you in a while. I'm glad my writing still reaches you.

really like this one a lot, not sure why but thats why i like it a lot lol love the wording as well

really like this one a lot, not sure why but thats why i like it a lot lol love the wording as well

@ PierceMyHeart
Thank you very much. I am truly sorry to hear about the loss of your sister. It's never an easy situation to go through to lose anyone, no matter who it is, but it is the living who suffer the most. I'm glad that this poem touched you in some way and that (though I hope they weren't bad recollections) you could relate. I cannot say I "enjoyed" writing it, but I'm glad I got it out of me and it came out so well.

First and foremost, I'm sorry for the lost of a loved one, I know how that feels, I've lost a lot of family members over the past couple of years. I love the layout, purple flower is so fitting, the poem is beautiful and the title is very fitting. I assume you lost a significant other, I haven't lost a significant other but I did lose my sister unexpectedly. The poem describes the person as a distant memory, as we all do when we first lost someone to death we expect to see the or feel them next to us in bed or certain circumstances, or situations leave us with expecting their presence only to realize that they are no longer with us. The poem is simply beautiful.

First and foremost, I'm sorry for the lost of a loved one, I know how that feels, I've lost a lot of family members over the past couple of years. I love the layout, purple flower is so fitting, the poem is beautiful and the title is very fitting. I assume you lost a significant other, I haven't lost a significant other but I did lose my sister unexpectedly. The poem describes the person as a distant memory, as we all do when we first lost someone to death we expect to see the or feel them next to us in bed or certain circumstances, or situations leave us with expecting their presence only to realize that they are no longer with us. The poem is simply beautiful.

First and foremost, I'm sorry for the lost of a loved one, I know how that feels, I've lost a lot of family members over the past couple of years. I love the layout, purple flower is so fitting, the poem is beautiful and the title is very fitting. I assume you lost a significant other, I haven't lost a significant other but I did lose my sister unexpectedly. The poem describes the person as a distant memory, as we all do when we first lost someone to death we expect to see the or feel them next to us in bed or certain circumstances, or situations leave us with expecting their presence only to realize that they are no longer with us. The poem is simply beautiful.