I feel like you created something really powerful with this poem. I liked it. I think that you really utilized the requirements of the poem to your advantage. You used them in such a clever way. I loved the way you described death. I loved how you made me feel creeped out. I liked that I felt haunted and moved by this poem. You have a really good sense of what words to use. I think you chose each word nicely and didn't leave me wanting more even though the poem was pretty short. The poem still felt complete and I felt really satisfied with everything. I thought it was so well done and I enjoyed it. I think that you really embodied ideas about death. Nice job!
I think that you really utilized the requirements of the poem to your advantage. You used them in such a clever way. I loved the way you described death. I loved how you made me feel creeped out. I liked that I felt haunted and moved by this poem.
You have a really good sense of what words to use. I think you chose each word nicely and didn't leave me wanting more even though the poem was pretty short. The poem still felt complete and I felt really satisfied with everything. I thought it was so well done and I enjoyed it. I think that you really embodied ideas about death.
Nice job!