.chrn - Comments

@ rainbebez.tears.
Thank you. I feel bad now that I couldn't think of a more creative title than "chrono" minus the "o"s.
I try and keep my poems relaxed as my prose is more action-centric, so it's nice to hear that I succeeded!

Wow...this is beautiful...

I'm sort of new to the world of poetry but from the ones I've found to really like I've noticed that I absolutely love pieces that really touches me emotionally and soothes me. ..kind of like a lullaby. As I read it totally mellowed me out and by the end of the last stanza I was relaxed in a pile of of sighs. Literally, I felt spellbound.
This piece had a very dream-like quality that I loved. It was smooth and 'soft' (I am not sure yet if poetry can be "soft" but it has been my go-to word.) I think if I were to read poetry to my future children to pacify them, this one would definitely be one of my favorites...

I am also a sucker for simplicity...can I just say I love the layout?? I love the soft neutral tone and format---it definitely complements your poem and lets your poem shine.

I think I got a wee-bit carried away...Here is my recommendation!!

Great piece! I thoroughly enjoyed it!

Oh no...double posted. I honestly don't know how I keep on doing this.

I apologize, but your poem was great so I think you deserve two comments...

Again, great job! And I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors!!