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Michael Westen (450)

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I love how smooth this one is. It's effortless. The third stanza is definitely my favorite. "My lungs cease to expand and breathe" hits a point that is somewhere on some scale.

I love this.

January 18th, 2015 at 02:39am
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Thanks for the comment and for reading.

July 14th, 2014 at 05:19am
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This is imaginative and marvelous. I really enjoyed this piece

July 13th, 2014 at 11:48pm

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