The Poisoned Molasses Cycle - Comments

Don't even mention it. I will be reading more of your work.

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
Wow, thank you so much. You are one of the few people who actually understand my poems. Not to mention, one of the few people who actually read my poems....

Thank you, again. It means a lot to me.

You grasped the rhyme scheme and made it your own in this piece. I am actually really amazed be this one, seeing as all the lines end up with a verb in the continuous form. I can honestly say you didn't overdid it.

This really seemed like a repetitive cycle that will continue to spin and spin, again and again. This poem made me think of the times I was broken inside and I had no idea what I was doing - trying to forget the pain and make myself believe everything was okay.

I adore this.

-Maria. :)