Wow is all I can say, this is a poem unlike any other that I've ever read, it flowed so effortlessly and it touched on some valid points about evolution. Evolution is underestimated. Everything in life evolves whether we like it or not, for example as you said attention grows to affection, and then evolves into love. I love the ending of this poem where describe the evolution of lust, love, loathe, and evil. Brilliant poem, so original unlike any, I've every read on this site. Thanks for sharing, please write more. The only thing I would have to disagree with about is the evolution of eternity. We don’t know enough about this subject matter to apply evolution.
July 20th, 2014 at 01:20am