The Strong - Comments

Awww thank you so much! @AllTimeLoverJess

You have a real talent, seriously. This poem is beautifully written and tragic and real, and that's what makes it so unbelievably good. Keep writing!

Thank you so much @PierceMyHeart

I like this poem, interesting subject matter, it flows effortlessly, and I love how you describe the characteristics of those that are strong. The weak mock the weakness within the strong, their cold and uncaring as to their fate, so much in this poem is true. People that are strong are tortured souls; it's what makes the strong and stronger. Unfortunately that's what our society has become vultures swarming around their prey wait to move in for the kill. What does kill or destroy us makes us stronger. I've been there done that, overall nice effort, on such a great subject matter.

I like this poem, interesting subject matter, it flows effortlessly, and I love how you describe the characteristics of those that are strong. The weak mock the weakness within the strong, their cold and uncaring as to their fate, so much in this poem is true. People that are strong are tortured souls; it's what makes the strong and stronger. Unfortunately that's what our society has become vultures swarming around their prey wait to move in for the kill. What does kill or destroy us makes us stronger. I've been there done that, overall nice effort, on such a great subject matter.