To Roam - Comments

Thanks a lot :) @The Warden's Wife

Thank you so much :) @PierceMyHeart

This is very beautiful poem; the flow of words from one stanza to the next was brilliant. It's short, but powerful, short poems if there really good like yours leave the reader wanting more. I must applaud you on the title, it is ever so fitting. If you’re really in love your heart will not roam. Relationships have their ups and downs, but when it come to real love your heart not entertain the notion to roam. I fully understand what you’re saying when you state in the poem please don’t let him leave, because if he leaves then your heart will roam to look for love again. Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Beautiful.
Short, but powerful. I applaud you.