Wonder Why? - Comments

I could actually feel a person screaming, saying things that had bottled up inside for a while and actually making me feel like I should scream for once too. It's true that it wasn't as intense emotional wise if I compare to your other writings but that screaming feeling is one of the best and you gave that to me along with the adrenaline rushing to my head over 35 dollars thanks to the gun. Well done!

-Maria. :)

I don't think it's as intense as some of your other stuff. Emotion wise. I guess I just can't feel the layers of emotion that I normally get from your writing. I like the way it's written though. Good job with this.

I don't think it's as intense as some of your other stuff. Emotion wise. I guess I just can't feel the layers of emotion that I normally get from your writing. I like the way it's written though. Good job with this.