Things Left Unspoken - Comments

@ Queen of Omega
Oh God, thank you so much! I don't even know what to say!! I'm a sucker for unusual poetry and unusual layout, so that tends to seep into what I create. And yeah, C418's pretty great. I've essentially turned my tumblr into a C418 fanblog.

Wow. Honestly, wow. This is, with absolute ease, the best poem I've ever read on this site. You didn't attempt to force a rhyme scheme when there's absolutely no need for rhyme at all. It flows in such a natural way - and it flows all the way through, no bumps along the way. The word choices are perfect. And best of all? Your structure. Not many people know that the way a poem is laid out is so important (I sure as hell didn't until I took a class), but you've obviously got a really strong grasp on it. I love the spacing. I love the parentheses. I love the shape of it, because it really brings everything together in the most fabulous ways. And yeah, I'm fangirling a little. I'm not even sorry. <.<

IN GENERAL, it's absolutely fucking fantastic and I must bow down to you.

also your theme is to die for fdsahiufdh. i see that minecraft influence 8D

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
Good. I keep forgetting I see things differently.

Ja, that's basically what I felt about it, like we want more than we have because we're programmed to progress rather than stagnate. But it doesn't always work, clearly.

Thanks!!

That's good! I can see it now.

I like how this poem started with the mention of the sky and ended with it. It's like things ended where they started, and that's good for this poem.

Humans tend to be greedy cause we are just that; humans. We all tend to want things we cannot have and hope top reach or get someday. It's just part of being human, being alive and moving forward.

-Maria. :)

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
It looks fine to me... oh! Shit, I'm using a TV as my monitor, I'll change it!! Sorry!

I was about to read this one but the text is so tiny that I can't read it. :(