Whigs @ Tories - Comments

Wow I really appreciate that. I don't really like most of my stuff either, haha. I don't think many poets do

I liked the subject because as men we aren't supposed to show our emotions. We are tough and don't cry. Lol so I think it shows courage for a man to write about it. I thought the flow was very smooth. I really liked the couple lines after. Tell me a joke, Jack. I don't like my writing very much so I'm not being an ass when I say I've noticed an improvement in your writing.

@ MirageOnTheHorizon
Thank you. May I ask what specifically?

I really like the way you wrote this.