The Train - Comments

@ Lightmydarkness
Thank you much(:

Wow. This is really haunting and almost confronting, I feel sad for having read this but i absolutely love the way you have written this I think it is incredible. I love the line "And now the city has grown to twice its size,
but she never returned to see with her empty, vacant eyes" So haunting. Well done :)

@ Deathmare
Thank you

Well done. I applaud you.