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  • SleepyKitty

    SleepyKitty (100)

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    @ foREVer Remembered
    Thank you so much! I wrote this about two years ago and didn't want to show anyone until I had overcome how I felt, even if it was just a small step towards a happier life. Your comment makes me feel like you understand my emotions better than I did.
    September 2nd, 2014 at 11:15pm
  • foREVer Remembered

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    This made me tear up a bit,
    "Why am I locked in?" makes me think the "tight bin" is a horrible place but
    "Or are you locked out?" makes me believe you have found or learned something others haven't.
    Also on the eighth stanza "I can't seem to move on" I can relate to being stuck in places in my head better left to collect dust, but maybe if you haven't moved on then maybe you haven't learned how to. I hope this is about the past and that you've climbed out of the "bin" and are no longer "locked in". Keep on writing I enjoyed his piece.
    September 2nd, 2014 at 05:56pm