October 6th, 2014 at 06:37pm
This was beautiful. It's also relateable. While not everyone may be able to relate the anxiety that comes with coming out to family or the moment of realizing you don't relate to the word of God like you were "supposed" to be, just the idea of it all is such a strong topic.
"My thoughts were the stone.
My thoughts were the mortar.
With just my thoughts, I have built walls
that will never come down."
No matter what a reader has gone through, we all have things going on and we try to protect and distance ourselves from it. The first, opening part was my favorite though, when you specifically used the idea of thoughts in relation to a great castle being guarded. You have an amazing way with words and I loved every second of this.
This is just such a powerful, powerful piece of writing.
(Also, if this is based on something you really went through; I'm so sorry, and I hope things will or have already gotten better for you.)