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  • HeartlessDemonz

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    'I AM!/ The monster you will never see/ I am the pain and misery/ That you've brought to me.' Good job with this.
    September 17th, 2014 at 10:23pm
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    'I AM!/ The monster you will never see/ I am the pain and misery/ That you've brought to me.' Good job with this.
    September 17th, 2014 at 10:23pm
  • HeartlessDemonz

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    I really like this. It flows really well. I like the imagery and word choice. It's also pretty intense. At least, to me it is. My favorite part is
    September 17th, 2014 at 10:21pm
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