Our Love - Comments

I really love this poem. It reminds me of two people who are united in love even as elements of them are falling apart. I really like the way you use the "Three word lines" (I don't know what they are actually referred to as) because they are so effective to the poem. Fantastic work love it :)

This poems potrays a relationship that runs deep, otherwise they wouldn't be together doing all the things you described. I like how this was simple, yet the meaning came across nicely without breaking the flow. Your way of describing everything that comes along in a serious relationship is very well done.

-Maria.

I just woke up from a really long nap to see that you'd posted this poem. And I was caught very off guard as I continued to read it, because of how much I could relate to it in my own relationship with my husband.

That being said, I love this poem!! So simple, yet so meaningful -- it's been a while since I've read a poem that made me feel the way this poem did! Great job