"i never threw stones in the air i threw them at my toes"
This line really stuck to me. I like the structure of this, like the way words are placed and repeated. I get this 'never ending cycle' feel from it. (Not sure if that was intentional) Great job as always.
in the air
i threw them at my toes"
This line really stuck to me. I like the structure of this, like the way words are placed and repeated. I get this 'never ending cycle' feel from it. (Not sure if that was intentional) Great job as always.