Tall, Dark Stranger - Comments

  • ablackwelltp

    ablackwelltp (100)

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    Thank you very much! My original ending was less ambiguous and I'm very glad I made the change because I think the mystery adds a lot to the poem. I should have some more writing up before the new year and I hope it meets your expectations Smile
    December 7th, 2014 at 09:59pm
  • BecauseSheSaidSo

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    I just read the article about this poem, and I'm so glad I actually clicked the link to read this. I genuinely like this. I like the fact that you didn't outright say that the tall, dark stranger is death, and even then it's just ambiguous enough. Looking forward to reading more of your work!
    December 5th, 2014 at 01:17am