The Dance - Comments

Thanks for your comments and reading.

I have to start out by saying that I am not usually a fan of rhyme in poetry. Often times it feels forced, or simply isn't done right, but none of those are issues for you in this poem. This feels natural, and it builds upon itself just like a dance does. This is structured wonderfully. There is clear passion in not only the description of the actual dance, but in your writing. This is very well done!