What pulled me in was the title, I really like it. Then reading the poem I was just wowed. I love the flow of it, I love the words you use. When you start describing him, I think that might be my favorite part. It makes me think of oil and water and how they don't mix, but they're puzzle pieces and somehow they just fit together like they're suppose to.
"Beauty cannot exist without hideousness, as dark cannot exist without light." is my favorite line. It's so perfect.
"Beauty cannot exist without hideousness, as dark cannot exist without light." is my favorite line. It's so perfect.
Great job. I'm definitely recommending this.