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  • Michael Westen

    Michael Westen (450)

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    This is sweet, in a sad way. Some of the grammar and punctuation is a bit off, but it's not really a big deal.

    I really like the line "she'll touch but can no longer feel."
    April 27th, 2015 at 02:16am
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