May 28th, 2015 at 09:26pm
Wow, this just struck me. The title drew me in immediately, and then the actual body of the poem? Wow. Who knew something with seven lines could just stick out like this? I really like the pure simplicity, but at the same time, the meaning behind your words was anything but simple. It was blunt and in your face. I actually reread it about five times and every time, I still honestly got the chills. That's the only way I can correctly describe it.
I don't even know, man. This just felt intense. But a really good intense. You're very talented.
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it, your comment absolutely made my day.