'If it's just the sorrow you seek/ Just know all excuses are weak' and 'Here I am again../ Fading right where I stand/ Fighting the growing darkness/ Blossoming with all the heartless' Are my favorite parts. I guess the best way to describe why is that they speak to me. I completely understand. You know I've missed reading your poems, and you didn't disappoint me. Some of it feels forced though and the flow gets messed up. That's my only thing I can really point out. Good job.
You know I've missed reading your poems, and you didn't disappoint me. Some of it feels forced though and the flow gets messed up. That's my only thing I can really point out. Good job.