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Clearturquoise (100)

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Wow that's a really strong poem. I really like the swearing in it, it adds to the intensity

June 29th, 2015 at 03:59pm
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That was intense. You have great imagery in the words, and I feel like the tone comes across pretty strongly. My favorite part is the last stanza. Good job.

June 29th, 2015 at 09:16am

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