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  • Bitter Optimist

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    aww that's such a privilege! To have had some sort of input in your writing process - wow! I definitely am not taking that lightly - thank you. And you definitely should be proud of how it turned out. It's a brilliant read.
    August 29th, 2015 at 11:29pm
  • Nine Twenty-Two

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    This one was fun. I wanted to do something a little abstract (by my standards anyway) so I actually tried to write kinda like you would. I kinda sat there like "how would Khyati write this?" haha. It's not perfect by any means but I liked the way it turned out.
    August 29th, 2015 at 06:24am
  • Bitter Optimist

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    Yeah I had noticed that you hadn't posted much in a while. But hey! This is actually quite interesting. ///Fuck it all// - yes THANK YOU. It's a different style than what I'm used to from you. I like it.
    August 29th, 2015 at 05:25am