Aw thank you!!! Reading your comment made my day,
September 12th, 2015 at 05:47am
"Essence burns like an eternity, chained against free will.
Patience is a virtue, we want and want until.
We get what we want, and lose the desire.
I've seen love burn away in a whisper of a fire.
Arguments deplete us, walking away deletes us." I love this part the words the flow the rhyme its all just perfect