Fallen Through - Comments

The layout of this poem, I think, is what made it so strong. It's strange, yet it strangely made me want to read the poem more, and had these been split any other way or told as separate poems, I don't think they would have had quite the impact it did. Good job!

At first I found this difficult to read because of the way it is laid out but I think that's my favourite part about this poem, actually. I had to go back and read it, re-read it, and started to understand the words and the story once the block had been cleared.