April 25th, 2007 at 02:14am
Our Time - Comments
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If Pink Floyd made another song called 'Time' these would be the lyrics.April 22nd, 2007 at 07:31am
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I luv it more than parvin!!!!!!=) (and everyone else for that matter)
~megApril 13th, 2007 at 12:23am -
"So often we
Forget to see
That soon this time
Will cease to be."
Allowed myself to quote your poem because that is like THE ending:) I LOVE the rhyme. Very very good:DApril 7th, 2007 at 08:22pm -
damn! i frigg'n LOOOOOOOOOVE that one!!
it's my new favorite poem! <3April 6th, 2007 at 12:31am -
wow .. that was a great poem .. it had great rhythm and the rhyming worked well.
good one jessiApril 5th, 2007 at 10:33am -
Tis very goodApril 5th, 2007 at 10:14am
I like it!