2:16AM - Comments

I really adore the formatting in this poem. I felt like it really added to the content of the poem and it was really cool to read. I also really like the repetition, it almost seemed like it added to the hint of sadness that the poem had which was really lovely.

Fantastic job!

So I'm not big on poetry and that's simply because I can't do it. I can't use so few words and make something sound so beautiful. I really loved this though. If I'm going to read poetry, I prefer for it to be about nature and emotions and obviously this was both. The idea of it being one thing (spring) and feeling like another(autumn) is relatable on more than just a seasonal level.

Also I'm the kind of person that thinks on the realistic side of things. The way you ended this was beautiful. Most of the time things are to good to be true.

This was just beautiful!

This is such a lovely poem I loved the repetition you used throughout, it really reinforced the idea behind the poem. The poem also flows well, and doesn't feel choppy in the slightest. I really enjoyed reading this! I also liked the hint of sadness there was to it, despite it showing happier times.

And your layout is wonderful, too