I like this a lot death. It's always been a bit discouraging and motivating to read other poems. The stuff some of you write at your age totally blows my mind.
I like this. It makes me take into consideration of the capability we have. I think we all posse a beautiful mind, some are just know how to make it flow off the tongue to be more appealing while others just bluntly say it. Both though, carry the same emotions, just express it differently.
Thanks, man.