Forged of Pills - Comments

  • aubs

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    When I first opened up this poem, I was so interested in the way it was written, with the roman numerals, because I don't think I've ever seen that before in poems. You can tell that I don't read poems very much because I was so amazed at it.

    This whole poem was so eerie. You used such short phrases to describe the things that were happening, and the people involved. It was sad as well because of the girl; she just seemed like a sad person. I'm not too good at reading into poems, so sorry if it doesn't seem that I have much to say. But I loved this poem; it was wonderful.
    March 4th, 2016 at 09:38pm
  • lost em.

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    Repost Oops
    February 13th, 2016 at 11:56am
  • lost em.

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    This is beautiful and gave me chills. I love the images it creates. And the banner & layout are so beautiful!
    February 13th, 2016 at 11:56am