Sparkle, Baby, Sparkle - Comments

A beautifully written poem, I loved that at first it seems so wonderful (your imagery was beautiful), but then it turns around to be something rather negative at the end. It's ambiguous, and very, very interesting.

Short but sweet. This poem was great. How you described how you viewed the water - diamonds glittering - and how it made you feel was really interesting.

After reading, I really wish I knew the connection between how you view the water and why that would make you feel unclean. But I think coming to my own conclusions about that (or being left wondering) is probably one of the great things about poetry.