Suntouched - Comments

  • losing control.

    losing control. (4250)

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    Okay, so I don't know a whole lot about poetry so I always struggle to comment on poems, but here we go.

    This is so so beautiful and I just want to take it and keep it and read it whenever I feel like I need to smile. You have such a lovely way of wording things every time you write, and it all just flows so well and is all just so perfect. I also really like the way you formatted this, it felt like a little adventure to read because of the things you had capitalized and what not lmfao

    But yes, this was just so lovely and great and you're so fantastic I can't deal with it.
    June 14th, 2016 at 05:34am
  • dawn of light

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    I am crying
    THIS IS TOO PRECIOUS
    May 29th, 2016 at 07:49pm
  • kaul hilo

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    THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL oh my god I want to treasure this forever
    May 29th, 2016 at 03:04pm