Frick this is too good Both the layout and the poem itself (I love the rhyming scheme). I don't have the right words at the moment but I love the way you describe this kind of like inner turmoil, and the imagery (which, I feel the colour scheme of the layout is very fitting), and how the title fits so well. I like how the poem is in all caps because it gives a sense of urgency, the way a really bad storm might, and I like how there's no punctuation because I like the way it reads that way.
My favourite line is a cyclone of a different kind.
My favourite line is a cyclone of a different kind.