I thought the beginning was hands down relatable (realistic). I liked this tone you have because from what I see it as, you’re writing this through a more telling than showing aspect. And I really love that.
I am in love with the way you string your words together, especially here, “...but when i open my mouth to ask all the words stumble out wrong,” because it’s so precious and hits a spot. I loved the shy vibe you present because I can definitely relate. Wonderful piece!
I am in love with the way you string your words together, especially here, “...but when i open my mouth to ask all the words stumble out wrong,” because it’s so precious and hits a spot. I loved the shy vibe you present because I can definitely relate. Wonderful piece!