Rain - Comments

Everything about this is marvelous. I loved the comparison between the narrator and rain because it’s both emotional and sensational. I especially liked this line, “and trickles down your spine” because we can see the shift of the comparison itself going from the actual droplets to someone. It was just beautiful. The ending was a powerful punch. Lovely piece!

@ pocahontas.
Thank you so much for saying that! After I wrote this, I actually made the decision that I want to get my poetry published this year. It means so much to me!

This is absolutely beautiful, every single word. The small, monochrome layout is reminiscent of rain droplets and the nonexistence of something "gone" - perfect whether intentional or not. Your words deserve to be published.